Ricky, i really like dormates. It Is actually my favourite story so i hope you dont mind if i use it to influence a peice that i am writing. It wont be exactly the same as yours but it will have similarities. Even if you dont feel like it maybe post a quick epilogue to finish the story off. It will quikly end the story so therefore it will feel complete, the fans will be happy and you wont have to feel like you didnt finish it properly. An epilogue is all it needs to wrap it up. Maybe some time in the future with lapis and peri married and there kid is called pumpkin. Maybe, just saying. I hope you take my advice , nikola