riedel_angelica

Under editing

mnjryu

I’m not a basher, and I’m not a fan either. I’m just here to give my honest opinion about your story. The storyline is good and interesting, but I don’t think the writing style is as strong. Some of the lines of the FL and ML feel too exaggerated, which makes their dialogues sound a bit unnatural. The story has potential but I think it would be better if the characters’ lines were more natural and realistic.

riedel_angelica

@mnjryu Thank you for sharing your honest opinion. I understand your point about the writing style and dialogue. However, I'd also like to clarify that some of my works are not yet edited. Each story has notes explaining its current status and the reason why it hasn't been edited yet.
            
            For the BSeries, in particular, I haven't started editing it yet, and I've already mentioned the reason in the notes of the story. So some of the things you pointed out may still be addressed once I get to the editing stage. Hshshs. 
            
            I appreciate the feedback, especially regarding making the characters' dialogue more natural and realistic. I'll keep that in mind when I eventually revise the story. Thank you for reading! ❤️
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AngelGalvez

ate akala ko ba chamyxoxox pangalan mo dito sa Wattpad yon Pala riedel_angelica kanina ko pa sine-search yong pangalan mo walang lumalabas excited panaman ako na basahin yong the unwritten thesis hahahaha pero nahanap ko na teh at na follow na din kita hehehehe

riedel_angelica

@AngelGalvez hello. Thank you po! Nagpalit ako last month hehehe
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JaSeon2

KAILAN PO BALIK SA REWRITTEN:(((🥹🥹🥹

riedel_angelica

@JaSeon2 The Rewritten Muse po
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JaSeon2

Anoo na pi title now? Hehehe
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riedel_angelica

@JaSeon2 nagpalit na po ako ng title non hehe
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