I really appreciate you reading this. It being a transcription I know it wasn't always easy to tell who was talking. If you don't mind answering, was there a particular part of character you liked?
It seems like that @PiyushPawar999 . Your story is amazing, kind of. But the words... the grammar... I can't blame it on your writing. At least I am enjoying the story at this time... hope the story could improve.