rinaXhazurina

So I just started reading the first book of Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson (no spoilers pls) and pretty much it's starting off good. The writing style is very simple and easy to catch up on; it doesn't rely on heavy intricate writing and the worldbuilding and characters are already astounding. If anyone here has read his work, do enlighten me on some writing techniques he uses that you've also applied to your own work.

Swanangel15

Hello! Thank you for reviewing my story,'battle of invisible thorns- part 1 of rise of midnight'. 
          I know my story is quite clichéd, and I was inspired by a poorly written Roblox plot, my perfect sister, I didn't like the ending so I decided to write my version. And changing some details. I have an obsession with talking about tropes and cliches, and creating my own plots and characters that defy clichéd storytelling. 
          
          I can't guarantee a perfect story and I'm insecure about it. When I mean that, I mean:
          1. Must have good character development. Meaning changing in a good way. Sometimes I can't think of ways the protagonist can change. 
          2. 0 plot holes. 
          3. Making sure every single character is multi dimensional. 
          4. Mary sue. Is my protagonist a Mary sue?

rinaXhazurina

@Swanangel15 Hello. Thank you for the appreciation. I will be getting back to you regarding these in probably by next week since these are critically good concerns and I'll be happy to further indulge you on it
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rinaXhazurina

So I just started reading the first book of Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson (no spoilers pls) and pretty much it's starting off good. The writing style is very simple and easy to catch up on; it doesn't rely on heavy intricate writing and the worldbuilding and characters are already astounding. If anyone here has read his work, do enlighten me on some writing techniques he uses that you've also applied to your own work.

Knighted_Rose

Just wanted to say hi! Super excited to see you still so active in the competitive circuit and doing reviews! Maybe when I finish my manuscript I could request a review from you? ^.^ 
          
          Hope all is well and keep chugging along!

rinaXhazurina

@Knighted_Rose Had a lot of reworking to do with mine. Tbh, I'm annoyed at myself for not moving on to progress the story and I keep on revising the first several chapters. I just realized how much of a perfectionist I am and I should really work on it cuz chapters aren't always perfect, most when it comes to the first ones.  Also, maintaining my writing style is a difficult feat when it requires time and I'm studying computer science so the difference between using natural and computer language is hard for me to smoothly shift from one to another. It's even harder when you try to make codes for computers and always keep in mind they don't have common sense like humans do. This results in me often writing computer instructions lacking some features which makes it have errors, and writing too much in the chapter of my book that are unnecessary filters. So I think I'll have a long hiatus after posting several more chapters to focus on my class.
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rinaXhazurina

@Knighted_Rose Nice to hear about those. Patiently waiting for the manuscript before I go binge reading again. As for the community, I've joined the Heather, Rose-Gold, and Chrysalis Community which are very welcoming and nice spaces to meet new interesting people and get a chance to develop your writing and expand your book.  Reviewing was a lot of work especially when it's about being tactful while delivering your main point. Though I'm not an expert at writing, my opinions just come from studying what makes a good book from reading and watching tips and guidelines online. Reviewing is also a significant way to develop your own book because you can also learn new ways and tips to develop your book by evaluating others'.
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Knighted_Rose

Also how are things going with your novel? It seems liek there is a lot of rewriting and restructuring going on! I notice you posting and editing chapters all the time which is really exciting :)
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rinaXhazurina

Thank you for the 100th follow @TheGemmeCommunity and to everyone who stayed on this reading and writing journey with me <333 You're all amazing!

rinaXhazurina

<3 Thank you
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LORAINEJD

@rinaXhazurina You are amazing, too ;)
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FantasyEqualsReality

Hello! If I'm not mistaken, I believe I'm reviewing your title in The Frosted Pages Awards! I'm a bit pinched on time, so I can't read through your entire story, but ASORA stands for "A Saga of Redeeming Aelan", correct? If so, I was confused on what Aelan actually was, since it isn't mentioned in the blurb or the description parts before the story. Can you clear that up for me?

FantasyEqualsReality

Thank you! I've finished judging the Best Title category! Apologies for any harsh markings, but I hope you accept what you receive!
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rinaXhazurina

@FantasyEqualsReality Hello. Thank you for bringing this up. Aelan is the name of the world /planet the humans and creatures are living in made by a deity during creation. It's like the name of our planet Earth but the name isn't supposed to refer to the planet (which is intentionally misleading for the story), but the humans and creatures as a collective. Hence, it's the redemption of the human and other creature races, overall.
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RedRoseFicz

Hello,
          
          We are organizing The Dreamcatcher Awards-an esteemed literary award-and we are currently looking for experienced judges to help us out in judging entries.
          
          We have been observing your work as a regular judge in literary competitions, and we would be honored if you could consider joining us. Your contribution would be a great deal in letting us pick the great works.
          
          If you're interested and available, please let us know. We'd be happy to provide more information about the award, judging criteria, and timeline.
          
          Thank you for considering our request!
          
          Best regards,
          Rose
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/386119528?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=RedRoseFicz

rinaXhazurina

@RedRoseFicz Hello. Thank you for the offer and appreciation but I'm full as of now with other reviews and the start of school. Wishing the best to your contest
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