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Hey, I just finished your Reiner fanfic and wanted to thank you for writing it. I really had fun reading it and find it regrettable that it it’s not more popular. I myself an author love feedback, so I wanted to tell you some things, I liked most. As an example, u did not write the same cliches like Y/n having a horrible childhood or her having overpowered titan powers. Her brain beeing her strongest weapon was really original and distinguishes your story from others. I have nothing to criticise, except for a little tip that I would like to give you: Reiner’s and Y/n’s relationship was super cute, I loved the Nicknames, the little Hand touches and how you build it, but I would have adored it even more, when the relationship would have grown a little slower. Them spending more time with each other, before they realise their feelings. All in all, I loved it and read the ff in one go. Myself having not english as my mother tongue could read it easy. I hope I am not pushing you with my feedback. Love to read more from you <3
ringaroundther0sy
oh my goodness thank you SO much!!! I am seriously so grateful for this message!! i appreciate the feedback more than you know and i will keep your advice in mind for any future works! again thank you so much i am just so happy right now that you messaged!!!!
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