Hi Bro, I don't know how you are (although I hope you are fine) and I don't know how you are doing with the rewrite of your story either, but what I know is that December is coming so I wish you a good Christmas and much prosperity ;)
One thing ive noticed: in chapter 31 its revealed that N is behind the machine that turns people into pokemon, what exactly is his motive to do this here? I know his end goal (in the games atleast) is to liberate pokemon from humans but it seems that this is uh...a little extreme for a guy who wants pokemon to live peaceful and happy lives