riolu17
Rewrite is still in the works.
I'm kinda just skipping ahead a lot of chapters right now and then going backwards to make it all make sense.
riolu17
riolu17
Got 500 words done yesterday for chapter 2. Will have more done today. A lot of my work has been studying up on Pokémon lore and getting backstories of everyone figured out.
There will be a lot of changes this time around. Some of you may hate it. Some of you may love it. This is my passion project and I want it done the way I envisioned it originally and I intend to have it done in one singular book.
riolu17
Huge sorry for constantly ghosting everyone here. I am gonna be doing more writing this year. Potentially even an original work or two that isn’t Pokemon related. Please be patient with me, as I have a LOT of hobbies that tickle my brain and know I will always have passion for writing. ESPECIALLY about the smol blue dog.
I love all of you, and your support and kind words makes this all so much more worth doing and I can’t thank any of you enough.
Have a wonderful new year everyone. ❤️
carlball_productions
progress on chapter 2 of the rewrite?
Jedaral
Happy New Year Riolu <3
mrpearkingMrpearking
when do you think chapter 2 will be posted?
Jedaral
Do you think the interval between one chapter and another will be monthly at this time or in the future? Or will you publish chapters at an unscheduled pace depending on how you feel and the time you have ?
riolu17
I am pushing to write more as of late. I plummeted into a well of my own emotions all of last year and I’m finally in a state of mind where I can do all the things I enjoy without persistently criticizing my own works. As ForrestFyre said: Life just catches up to me sometimes. I have other hobbies outside of writing that I pursue like making music, but I’m lately putting those aside to focus on the other avenues of my creativity.
And I appreciate the warm comments from everyone, I understand the excitement,ent and the potential disappointment when I disappear for months on end. It’s something I’m genuinely working on.
ForrestFyre
@Jedaral I’d imagine it’s the latter. Writing is never easy - it takes a lot of time and effort. I personally have all the time in the world to write, but writer’s block is a plague that’s easy to catch and hard to get rid of, so you also have to pace yourself or you’ll never get anything done. Combine that with work, family, etc. and you’ve got yourself a recipe to write maybe 5 sentences/week. Give him time. He’ll deliver eventually, and it’ll be like a gift from the Gods.
UntalentedBrick
I wonder if this is still gonna use the team plasma stuff or something entirely new, either way i'm excited to see how this rewrite plays out!
Jedaral
There is a potential, I know, the presentation seemed to me as a little more cinematic and that is really fine as a start, yes, I still do not understand why there is still no description that gives us a synopsis of this story with new structure and narrative to be a remaster. On the other hand, if you're not going to remove Deceitful Original, it would be pretty cool for me and for those who want to see the differences between both versions and see how the play was before.
Rioluiscute
@riolu17 good to see an old story get a revival! I'm pretty sure I read the OG on ff.net, and was legit disappointed when part two was never finished ( maybe it was, I haven't checked in years sorry) very curious what the rewrite will change, keep up the good work. (=
riolu17
Deceitful Rewrite Chapter 1 is out now.
