ritammaya

I can't believe you are real. The POP story is so well carried out, the humor, the romance, the pain, the longing, the desperation, the devotion they have stolen my heart I can not think of a better version. Also the funny Gasiv is to die for I loved the exploration of his deep attachment to Dastan and that little backstory of the love of brothers really made me happy(a sucker for family love). The pride Tamina has, the duty she takes so seriously. I loved it all. Thank you for writing thus, writing it so well and giving my beloved childhood story a satisfactory ending. 

Love the POP story!! I think a chapter is missed though...between 15 and 16...ot kind of starts in the middle of a sentence and I'm so disappointed that I cant see what happens during his awakening and their reunion!!! Please add that missing part if you still have it!! Or at least tell me what happens!

Decision Made (P. O. P)  was a great story,the Funniness,understanding,the ending all were great, If this ever made into a movie I will be the first one to run to get ticket,really great story.

Thank you so much for writing Tamina x Dastan fanfic cause this is ny childhood we're talking about here and I love you for keeping these characters in check and the writing is extraordinary oh my  It's a nice book
          
          Ok bye

Shun mana ghosh ko bol diya
          Avi koi tension nhi hae
          And I have warned him...

please read my first book