jcbbrsmith

Hi Brian,
          
          I just shared Diamonds on my page in hopes to get others to your lovely story. I'll continue again tonight after the kids go down.
          
          Cheers!
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ritchiebrnr

@jcbbrsmith Many thanks for that - Much appreciated.
            I am new to this site and don't have many followers - Every little helps.
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jcbbrsmith

Hi Brian!
          
          I've just complete chapter 1. I hope my comments are okay. I'm not good at constructive criticism lol

ritchiebrnr

@jcbbrsmith 
            Do you actually think there is some merit in my story DIAMONDS?
            I am still awaiting a result from that book club mob to see if they accept me.
            I fully accept your reluctance in contacting me via email but I can assure you my intentions are honourable and sincere - and I can prove it.
            Thanks again & Best wishes from BrianR
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ritchiebrnr

@jcbbrsmith 
            Any criticism is welcome and is ALL constructive.
            
            When I uploaded chapter 1 I found I had nowhere to put the Preface
            So I included it before Chapter 1 starts. In the original PDF copy, it is kept separate.
            I will try to answer all your other comments separately.
            Many thanks for your comments.
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