MiaStissi

Hello, how are you? 

rj230906

@MiaStissi awww hope you finish them soon :⁠^⁠)
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MiaStissi

I'm racking my brains over the chapters of my stories
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rj230906

@MiaStissi heyyy, I'm doing great. Just busy with exams and studying. How about you? 
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MiaStissi

Hello again! I have a slightly strange request. I wanted to ask you to be a beta reader for my stories translated into English. Tell me if there's any obsolete words or expressions that aren't used anymore. If the sentences don't make sense. Tell me if something fits together, like the verb tense... things like that. I don't know if you've already been asked this before being a beta reader, I don't even know if that's the right word, but anyway, this is the first time I've asked anyone. I don't have a beta reader for stories in Italian, but for those translated into English, I think it's necessary. Then, if you'd like, we could talk about more than just the stories, maybe get to know each other. You seem nice, of course, if you're up for it. I'm waiting for your response as my beta reader, but if you don't want to be my beta reader, we could still just talk and get to know each other.

MiaStissi

@rj230906 Well, I hope you like it.
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MiaStissi

Hi! I wanted to hear your opinion. I saw your comment on my Batman x Joker story a few days ago, and it got me thinking. I wanted to ask if you'd find it easier and more comfortable reading my stories in English. I don't know if you've understood, but I'm Italian, so I don't write much in English, except for a few stories I've translated into English. I wanted an honest opinion from someone who's English.

rj230906

@MiaStissi definitely will check it out ❤️
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MiaStissi

I don't know if you're interested, but I just uploaded a new story, which was already on my Italian profile, in English. I don't know if it's your genre, but you can go check it out.
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rj230906

@MiaStissi great to hear that ❤️
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jyorytzzz

Hey Rj!!
          
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          Vijay and Vennela both had feelings for each other from childhood, as time flew she decided to confess her feelings to him only to witness him on his knees before another, shattering her heart!
          
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rj230906

@jyorytzzz hey I'd love to ,Defo will support you , go gurlll!!!! 
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MiaStissi

Hi. I'm glad you liked my story. I hope you had no problem reading it because, I don't know if I say it in the story, but I'm not a native English speaker but I'm Italian, and I use google translator, and I'm afraid I won't be able to make myself understood and that the text will be incomprehensible.

MiaStissi

Thanks, I'm glad to hear that. I'll try to pay more attention.
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rj230906

@MiaStissi that's is completely alright although it was confusing at some parts , the others were entirely great  loved your work 
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Alekhyaglow

Hello... Amrutha parinayaniki pedha garu.. chala bagundhi story... Mari pelli panulu eppudu start avuthayi.... Memu oka cheyyivestham.

Alekhyaglow

@rj230906 Wait chesthu vuntam.... bhojanalaki poornam boorelu tappakunda pettali mari. 
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rj230906

@Alekhyaglow firstly chadivi , support chesinandhuku thank you and pelli panulu start ayyinappudu andariki pathrikalu avi ivi ivvali ga so appudu cheptham  
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