Sup RJ, This is Allison. I really like your story; its very creative and has a lot of interesting plot points. I hope you continue distributing chapters; I'm looking forward to them. :)
I HATE HAVING TO WRITE THINGS LIKE THIS BUT IN ORDER TO FUFILL A BOOKS "FLAVOR" I HAVE TO ADD WHAT I DON'T WANT TO ADD. EXODUS AND MILA......SOLVE THIS CASE!