rlail2

this has to be one of my best works... I did mention about making a new story sometime last year but now I'm actually doing it and ready to publish my work! xoxo, rlail2 https://www.wattpad.com/story/162902635

blackeina

Hi love, can you please check out my first work? I would be thankful and glad if you tell me your opinion :)

rlail2

hey, so I just read some of you story. I love the story line, but my feedback is to make proper sentences and put them into paragraphs. That way it's easier to follow. But I love the story so far and I will continue to read it. That mysterious guy from the shops the one that dropped that picture has me intrigued to read more and that's just what every story needs, it's kinda like a hidden tease.
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