@WasatchWriter I must say that I love the fact that Irian’s character development is so much slower than most main characters. Sometimes, when I read that a character goes through some drastic physical changes or suddenly has to confront a major wrong, said character will immediately adapt or change their perspective. The use of patience instead gives Irian’s development, and the overall book, a greater sense of realism and effectiveness.
I can’t think of anything that needs improvement, though I am interested in the mythology occasionally mentioned dealing with Aliya and Toret. Is there any chance they’ll have a greater impact later on?
