Folks, listen to yourself.
Nothing I say is name calling. It's criticism.
Step back and understand that your writing will never be helped by people saying "WTG!" and "I absalately luv ur storey!"
If you write on here, and want to know why you haven't been discovered, then maybe someone should tell you the truth. In my opinion, if you want to get published, you need to have outside perspective on WHAT IS WRONG with your work. Not a bunch of people blowing smoke up your back side.
I will continue to be highly critical. Which, in my mind, is the most helpful thing that i can do.