I remember reading the story but I don't why I stopped reading this while it's quite intriguing at the early chapters, though too many coincidence, I keep going since they live in the same area meeting up by accident probably happen. Till I got the chapter how H step in to take Xavier place to close an important deal, though shes quite capable and understanding business, it's quite too far stretched for it too happen in real life, that too because X was asleep as the effect of the medicine. I feel the scene need to happen just to show reader how capable H is in business and show up like a hero, that's where I stopped reading the book.
And for the plastic Barbies to just show up at home too many times even after X instructed the security to not let her pass is really bothering. Important businessman such as X should have tight securities, no questions. People can't just barge in as they please. Except they got some help from inside like workers or something.
It starts really great and promising with rich people has their own private beach and Leo stopped her so Leo could meet H, and Luca has his own security following him everywhere, the trauma and everything but the coincidence and forced scene was just too much, its not fitting naturally in the story. I see the potential in the book though so as usual I'd post here and if it's bein rewritten I'd love to reread for the third time ❤️❤️
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