Romance Book Club

Please read my first chapter, I could use help with my writing so feel free to comment.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/369160236-the-mafia-boss
          Thank you!

A Romantic- mysterious Love Story (On going )
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376743847?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=mustary-jeny

Hi everyone I'm promoting my main profile please check out this reading list https://www.wattpad.com/list/1609453635?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading_list&wp_page=reading_list_details&wp_uname=MikaylaEvans7

Hi everyone I am litsparkle and I have posted my first work give it a try it has several healthy relationships and it's a fantasy book guyzz.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/375991767?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=litsparkle

Hello everyone! I'm a rookie writer Inspired by death note anime I've just finished the first chapter of my novel, Death Call. It's a story about an app with the terrifying power to kill anyone simply by dialing their number please have a look at it whenever you are free and comment your feedback as I'm always open to criticism as I know I have lot to learn and I'm new to this industry https://www.wattpad.com/story/375631020?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=orlandinks8877
          

OMG SO EXCITED PLEASE CHECK OUT MY BOOK AND GIVE LIKE FEEDBACK OR SMTH<3333
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/368210703?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=ilovesmutbabes

CHECK OUT MY BOOK </3
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/370505927?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=AllieDicaprio

https://www.wattpad.com/story/371133024?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=ScriptSage900

https://www.wattpad.com/story/370183594?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=fairylia90

This is my first book. A dark suspenseful romance i would say. The direction is pretty spontaneous depending on how much i drink 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/345534004?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=VolutionChronicles