Whispered_Destiny

I do believe you were rude to devilinahalo. If you do not like someones story, at least use a little more tact in telling them. 
          Devilinahalo has been nothing but kind to you, even commenting on all your chapters. 
          
          and yes, i did read your story. Its not bad, you just need to proof read it a bit more. There were quite a few grammatical errors. 
          But other than that, keep on writing ^_^