rorysdoom

Hey everyone! Would you mind reading my short story? <33
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1150098035-beneath-the-cherry-blossoms

rorysdoom

Does anyone do book critiques? I'm submitting a book for a contest and I wanted to get it proof-read first :)

MichaelsBootyFlake

I wouldn't mind reading through it ! 
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rorysdoom

Okay so I was writing some stuff in my book today and I'd finished writing my characters' backstories, so I was writing dialogue and I've discovered that I SUCK at writing dialogue.
          Like, I know my characters really well but when I try and make them speak it all goes downhill from there. My dialogue is so dry I can't stand it lmao 

Seamkidproy

Imagine dialogue scenarios in your head like you imagine them in your real life
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rorysdoom

Thank you for the amazing tips! I will definitely try all of them! :)
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MichaelsBootyFlake

@elanestial OHH AND ALSO, build their dialogue off of reality. Say you're character is edgy. Do you have any edgy friends? How do they speak? Use that to your advantage
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idgafology

Hi there! Hope you're doing good.
          
          If you're free and into chicklit + romcom books, do check out my book THE IMPERFECT HABIBI! You will be introduced to a new culture as this book is about a girl who belongs to a South Indian Muslim family! Check out the blurb to see if it entices you.
          
          I would really appreciate if you take your time to read, hit the stars and drop honest feedbacks on my new and ongoing book.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/267762601?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=idgafology&wp_originator=FFkEqivhQxQoQi2eS89ihUhhSGm8QvHHCvzoMLMiInckLQwbiozgmplVdFa%2B6II1GN1YB%2Fo5PEZexWgBNIEkmgIivF5YeRiWrhS7qCjhdLROQ5%2FfJaOJ7Qfa4DWYg4S8
          
          You can also check my completed book out- FILOFOBISK! Check out the blurb to see if it entices you. It's a young adult book about a concept that is alien to many- philophobia (fear of falling in love) Do check it out if you're interested and vote and share your thoughts!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/236495837?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=idgafology&wp_originator=dOPhp1eMDh6nea8zIejvqVK8QqsltDPqaBiba%2B6qCjRGVsTrrBP3CvkqaHDu4vhJPyFwFcnPKgy4Oqc7MWmEH2RTXNGsZM9wl9pC2Zzl5R2osyVrGOt3K3p%2Fe70o7f2j
          
          Thanks in advance! Have a great day :)

idgafology

@elanestial thank you! :)♡
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