@roseinscarlet
Waalaikumussalam sis.
I tell you, it's definitely a great story. Well, everything needs time to be at the top and your story deserved to be at the top. Believe in yourself and keep it up. For me, Her First Guy, totally different from other story which only talked about lovey dovey and romance things. But you did it in the other way round, although it had about romance, which is a normal thing, you wrote it very well and I can't deny it. Except your grammar and vocabulary need to be improved and I believe it will improve in a mean time. I know it takes a lot of time to improve and I believe in you that you can do it! Fighting sis! Don't let it pull you down.
Sincerely me ☺