Queen_Pawehler_

Hi can you please check out my new book savage i would really appreciate it if you did and if you do check it out please give me your feedbacks and opinions on how I can make it better.

roselilygc

@Queen_Pawehler srry i misspell ariana name 
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roselilygc

@Queen_Pawehler great story luv the opening and i like the competition between emillo and adriana. Keep up the great work. Saw a few flaw~ there is no rush so take ur time . as soon as ur finished writing the story go back and recheck for few mistakes.~ other than that ur story is great.
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