rosepetaltae

To those of you reading Cut to the Chase, I will be changing Jennie's name because I started this book a long time ago and now that I am back I do not feel like using Jennie from BP a s the antagonist.

PumpyMunpie

Holy mother of Jack! Thank you so much for reading my book <3 I hope u didn't find it boring XD 

PumpyMunpie

@rosepetaltae i really appreciate this. This means a lot to me cuz i get super insecure bout my writing. Thanks so much!
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rosepetaltae

@PumpyMunpie np! I really enjoy doing this! Speaking of things I enjoyed...you book was super great! It needs so much more attention omggg Your writing style is really good, and I like this slice of life vibe, and it's pretty funny. There were a few run on sentences that could easily be fixed by commas, but that's it. And I applaud you for that because I haven't finished editing my old writing from a year ago lmao and mine is horrible. This book deserves more hype! Dang this out me thru some emotions, espeicially when the boys were introduced. Dang bro I almost died right then and there. Super excited for the rest of your book! And no, I found it the opposite of boring, it was great, and you have some good vocabulary. Wishing you the best of luck in future writing endeavors!
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MiniiMini

Can review my book "How I met Your Father" please?

MiniiMini

@rosepetaltae it's okay!! I'm really thankful!! But when will you update your book lol
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rosepetaltae

@SupernaturalStardust fs! It might take some time since I have to catch up on some dm requests!
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MiniiMini

@rosepetaltae thank you for taking out some time to read it! I'm really grateful. Can you check out my other book, "Cinderella!?" , Please? Thank you
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hopephoria07

Hello (◍•ᴗ•◍) if you have some spare time, I have an ongoing book called 'BORN KILLERS' (a Min Yoongi ff) can you please check it out and give me Honest review for it (◍•ᴗ•◍)♥️
          
          Have a nice day/night ❤️❤️

hopephoria07

@preronasaha Thank you so much for the feedback (◍•ᴗ•◍)♥️♥️♥️ I'll improve my mistakes soon ♥️♥️
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rosepetaltae

@preronasaha Hey sweetie! Sorry it took so long ! But here's my overall review so far: I love it already. Definetly needs more love. There were a few places where commas were not needed, or places where the capitalization was off. Other than that, I loved this so much. The cover is beautiful. I love mafia books sm so I really enjoyed this one a lot. You are a truly talented writer! Keep on writing love! 
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aurora_erl

I read from your bio that you review books. if you've got time, please check out my book ( Purple Clouds ) It's Ongoing tho. 
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          Stay Healthy

aurora_erl

@rosepetaltae Thanks for your time ❤ Borahae *Spams Purplehearts
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rosepetaltae

@Aurora_Erle LMFAO I SERIOSULY NEEED MORE PEOPLE LIKE YOU IN MY LIFE AHAHAHHAHA  haha I liked your book a lot, I swear! Your writing style is something I'm not familiar with, like the bold. I do not mind it though. I PROMISE I'm being honest! Ofc there were capitalization errors because it's natural, and the majority of my work is unedited. 
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aurora_erl

@rosepetaltae hun, if you don't mind, can you just say about the stuffs which I need to improve on. Let it be harsh. 
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hercherryyy

Hey! Thank you for voting on my story, 
          Hope you really enjoyed it~~

hercherryyy

@mrsjeonsam thanks for your time 
            It means a lot :)
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rosepetaltae

@mrsjeonsam np! I loved reading it. here's what I thought so far: I think it's cute, but I don't want anything bad to happen to tae and Y/N  anyway haha, there were a few grammatical and spelling errors. But, the outline of the story is quite nice and I love how you incorporated the names of the songs as the chapters and the cute little tidbits of best bts moments. I really liked that and it's such a good idea! Thank you for letting me review your book!
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PumpyMunpie

Hey...um, For me this feels so conceited and I don't enjoy having to do this but when I read your bio and you mentioned how u give honest reviews I was actually curious. If you're willing to in your spare time, could you possibly check out my second book (ain't that simple)