rosewave25305

Please check out my first story.  It's just a trial on error. Please understand the struggle of a young writer  (I don't even know if I really should call myself that) hoping to receive feedback.
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/271374054

Nyx_Astra

hey pipi,
          bye i am deleting this today,
          bye...
          never forget me
          love you..
          ♥

Nyx_Astra

you are right, as much i'd love to listen to you, i can't turn back
            i am ready to go, packed and all...
            no last minutes worries....
            i will try to comeback soon...
            name will be same.....
            
            love you so much that it hurts
            ♥
            -pipi
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rosewave25305

@LYNNtheBRAVEgirl pipi did you read my msg? pipi dont... well, i know you wont listen to me. i'll never forget you, i promise. dont forget me. come back soon. i love you, so much.
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rosewave25305

its wondering how time flies so fast. last year in this day, i lost my father. i lost that person whom i love most. but it was peculiar, when i lost him, i didnt cry! he left us. but i know, he didnt mean to. but, you know, when the call comes from above, no one can escape.
          
          ......
          
          365 day without him, huh?
          well, i remember, when i was five, my parents worked in different places. we were separate. friday was the weekly holiday. father used to visit us in Wednesday. that day was my favorite day in a week. i remember, in a morning, father called me and informed that he could not come today. i remembered how much i cried for him. he would not come!
          but now, he will never come, ever.
          
          ......
          
          i dont believe that he lest us really. i believe he is even more with us. he will never left us. he cant! he is here, in our heart. he was my best friend. i used to share everything with him. i still share everything with him. when i get many things to share with, he arrives in my dreams, really!
          
          he is still with us, and always will be.
          
          Always

Nyx_Astra

@rosewave25305 
            i know saying 'sorry' is not so good, and i really hate the word 'sorry'
            and then again, i can't say "it will be alright ", cause that's all rubbish...
            these types of incidents creates a wound within us which cannot be cured by saying "i am sorry" or "it will be alright"
            so pipi,
            only i am saying is 
            "stay brave like you always were....."
            
            -♥ pipi
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rosewave25305

Nov 1 to Nov 18 
          guess what?
          my board exam :/
          may be there will be no connection between you and me :( 
          im gonna miss you all !!!! i'll miss reading your messages in my inbox !!!! i'll miss my inbox !!!
          plz prey for me, or else i will fail to pass the exam D=
          will you prey for me??? pleaseeeee????
          
          i am not going to forget to say "ALL THE BEST" to my sweet cousin @seekersky18961 
          "best of luck, i love youuu" <3 =)

rosewave25305

For all of my friends in India!!!!!!
          i came to know that there was a earthquake very recently. 172 or more lost lives. i hope you guys are all right, aren't you? plz reply something! i want to be sure that you are all right! after all, you are my friend!! PLZZZZZ im serious!!!!!!!

rosewave25305

@RainWolf29496 oh thank God *feeling relaxed a bit*
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RainWolf29496

@rosewave25305  i'm absolutely fine :-)
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