roxy_angel4

Quick someone tell me where to find English dub of Glitter force and Glitter force doki doki they're leaving Netflix how am I supposed to continue writing if they leave

roxy_angel4

I've decided to make books for Wuthering Waves. 

Mooonstonne

@ roxy_angel4  HAHAHAH lol same, anyway in on my way tò farmi last minute for clorinde, my navia needs her wife, no? Bu-byee!
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roxy_angel4

@Mooonstonne I'm a loyal genshin player don't worry. 
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Mooonstonne

@ roxy_angel4  that's pretty cool!
            Has wuwa got to you too? I get It, it's pretty... But  dont forget your genshin player nature soldier!!
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roxy_angel4

So I'm sorry for taking a really long break I'll start posting weekly updates for now on. I've been really stressed so yeah. I've been trying to get my grades up so. That has to do with it as well. I'll see if I can post something tomorrow. 

LunarFoxes1

@roxy_angel4 No worries! I'm pretty sure nobody minded.
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roxy_angel4

Day 1 of finals is done I have two more finals tomorrow before its the weekend and then my last final is on Tuesday I don't have a final for my 4th period so I only have three more finals to go I'm so nervous I hope I pass 

Humblewriterofships

@roxy_angel4 Good luckkk! Study hard and I know you'll pass :)) rooting for you!!!
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Hatsuk_ey

Hello! I hope all is well with you! :)
          Well, I've been reading some of your stories and they're really good, there's just one little problem, in some you don't separate the lines. I believe it makes it easier for the reader if it is "separated", you know? Something like:
          -I like strawberry- She said.
          -I like strawberries too!- He said.
          Different from how it is in some books, like Genshin. Where the lines are left without divisions, which can confuse the reader (my experience)
          Typically you put something like:
          Then she said I like strawberries and he replied I like them too
          
          I don't know, I think this could help you a little, because your stories are really interesting! It would be a good improvement for the reader, but it's up to you to decide.
          
          I really enjoyed your story, so please keep writing! I hope you have a great day!

roxy_angel4

@Hatsuk_ey you didn't offend me in any way I try my best to make my ideas different and unique 
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Hatsuk_ey

@roxy_angel4 With small modifications you will definitely go a long way! Your stories are very creative and really cool :)
            I hope I didn't offend you, I really liked your writing, but I thought this observation might help you :^
            Thank you for listening to me ;D
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roxy_angel4

@Hatsuk_ey thanks for the advice I'm trying to improve my writing I just wasn't sure how I'm glad that you are enjoying my stories 
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