rrisquee

I don’t own any of the photos on my profile unless I say so. it goes the same w whatever cover of some book I might post. comprende?

StuckedMask

Hi there! If you are interested in teen fiction or relatable crush stories, it would be nice if you could try reading my first story i just started yesterday and I really need feedbacks and support. Your feedbacks are much appreciated  lots of love, stuckedmask

rrisquee

@StuckedMask no problem!
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StuckedMask

Thank you for the feedbacks :) much love, stuckedmask
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rrisquee

@StuckedMask Hey there! It's a pretty good idea for a story. It isn't bad for your first time of writing. However, in my opinion, you shouldn't start with an introduction of how your character looks like.. maybe just the name but not too much. If you want the audience to know the height, etc. of the character, just reveal it to them casually (you don't have to reveal every detail of the character in the first chapter). Hope that helped you!
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