rrobynt

Hey! 
          	My niece has joined wattpad @geekysenpai !!!  Keep an eye out for her stories, she's a great writer. 
          	I don't use wattpad for writing so if you have any author tips, send them her way! And please send any PG stories you've found on wattpad as well. 
          	Good luck @geekysenpai !!!  

Glaciergirl2

Thanks so much for adding Larkspur Mittel to your reading list! I've been on a 2 month hiatus, and am now working on next chapter which I hope to post tonight or tomorrow. Thank you for all of your support in general, you are a great reader!

rrobynt

You're welcome! I was just tidying up my profile because it looked like I was reading over twenty stories!! I look forward to reading your next chapters :) 
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SnowInParadise

I would reply to all of your comments but you've posted quite a few (not that I am saying I don't like that, I do!) so I thought I would come and thank you on your wall! I love the feedback you've given me and will try and fix as much of it as I can. I'm always open for constructive feedback like the ones you've given me.

SnowInParadise

No way! For me, half the reason I post my stories onto Wattpad is for feedback so I can improve and write even better stories. I hope the sequel will live up to your expectation!
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rrobynt

Oh good! I'm always worried that it'll be annoying, or discourage people from writing, if I leave critical comments. I really liked your previous story so I'm excited to see what you do with the sequel!!
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Glaciergirl2

Hi - many thanks for the vote on chapter 20- would love to hear if you think something isn't working or anything that might make you pause (in a critical way)! Thanks so much-:)

Glaciergirl2

Thanks very much for this- both really good points, and I will be thinking of them as I move forward. Really appreciate your thoughtful critique!
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rrobynt

Hey, I'm really enjoying Larkspur Mittel. Two points you might want strengthen as you go are the First Consul's character and why the bogs are so important. The tension in the city was eclipsed a bit by the action around our heroine, which was good, but now I think we need reminded of what the stakes are for both the little larks and their city. 
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