Hey there!
I really enjoyed your story. The way you handled the emotions and atmosphere was amazing, it felt very immersive while reading.
While going through it, I had an idea… the scenes and moments have such a strong visual quality that I could easily imagine them being adapted into a comic or illustrated format. Have you ever thought about bringing your story into another medium?
I'm a commissioned artist, and I'd love the opportunity to collaborate with you if you're interested. You can check out some of my artwork on Instagram: @eve_verse_
If you like my style, feel free to reach out there for further discussion. I'd be happy to explore the idea together and would love to hear from you!