rubyynx

Give it a chance!!
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/410235663

anonymous114433

Okayyy my opinionn this is a great storyy it has soo much potential to move forward and become a unforgettable one, the pacing and events are really good but a very very small suggestion there are some grammatical errors in some places, im soo sorry it's just that if I see an error I get fixated on it and it kinda prevents me from yk involving in the story like usual, if you could fix those errors I think you're good, again amazing story admire you so much for being able to put your story into words, much love

rubyynx

@anonymous114433 oh, okay, I got that.
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anonymous114433

@rubyynx hate is a far away feeling from what I feel for you this kind of sentence formation I hear a lot tho, if ydm where are you from
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rubyynx

@anonymous114433 You’re not making me uncomfortable. And by the way, I’m not from India. Also, can you tell me which sentence you’re talking about? I’m waiting... :)
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voxnoir

I read the first 3 chapters and that’s actually surprisingly good 
          I liked it 
          But just a suggestion the 1st chapter was in 3rd pov so maybe add to the 2nd chapter 
          That it’s ara’s pov .. if u want tho

voxnoir

@rubyynx <33 hope it’ll be worth ur time
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rubyynx

@voxnoir ohkayy loveee. I'm definitely going to start it..
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voxnoir

@rubyynx my pleasure 
            Well it’s the only story on my page I started it abt4 days ago
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voxnoir

I might scary u by how fast I replied but I was online TT 
          I have an idea wanna hear it .?

voxnoir

Ntmy ruby
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voxnoir

@rubyynx okay so starting of tmr we will start it 
            u can start reading my book and i will do the same comment what u feel 
            And when we each finish we would send each a real opinion 
            I’d do it tonight but I wanna write the next chapter and I feel like it TT
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rubyynx

@voxnoir Yes that's a really good idea. I agreed. I'm ruby. We'll support and real opinions to improve too. Go ahead;)
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