kay o sunshine

If I see that the male lead in your story is named "Will" I will most probably read it because I love guys named Will. For example: Will Herondale from The Infernal Devices...Will Anderson from The Teddy Bear Agreement...Will FROM EVERYWHERE. YOU MARK MY WORDS...I'm gonna marry a Will in the future...wait and see...(and yes I know this is an unreasonable dating standard...and yes, I know this is prob why I don't have a boy friend) 

I swear if I see another story with the words "Bad Boy" in the title, I'm gonna explode

when you start reading a story that had a great summary but it has no plot and terrible character development and grammar