I'm fanning you for the sake of seeing where your story goes. I'm still not completely sold on it but please don't hate me for that. It's just that I've seen plenty of stories here on Wattpad that start off nice like yours does but devolves into something that hurts my eyes. From what I can see, you've got a great writing style and your concept's rather creative so I want to see where it goes. Welcome to Wattpad, Duckie!
-Louis