Kashvi_R
Hi Spaghetti Monster,
I would love your precious feedback on my first novel https://my.w.tt/qmlez3sSa4
runesstarsbutterbeer
CeciandJack
Ccongrats!!
You posted a book!
Jack
CeciandJack
Wow!
You wiped our book out in record time. Awesome!
Was it any good?
Are you going to post a story for us to read?
✌❤
Jack
runesstarsbutterbeer
I've even been watching documentaries about the cult mentality recently, and although I've always dreamt of writing a fantasy novel, it could be super fun to make it more realistic
runesstarsbutterbeer
Also have one chapter for a book titled "what to do when faced with a crazy swan"
runesstarsbutterbeer
Regarding the story, as you wish :D I dug up some cringey writing from 2015. It's a sort of opening for the fantasy cult murder spree idea mentioned ages ago. Still like the idea so it might go somewhere. In the meantime I'm busy with first year med classes...
CeciandJack
Good morning and thanks for reading our crime texts book, Runes. And you really should post a story. How about a short sketch?
Jack
CeciandJack
@runesstarsbutterbeer that's awesome. I think you are going to totally dig the part two.
runesstarsbutterbeer
I actually have a short extract, written years ago, of the idea I had talked to you about. Would you do me the honour of reading it? It would be great to have some feedback
runesstarsbutterbeer
@CeciandJack No, thank you for writing them! I'd actually forgotten I had it in my library and just started reading it again, it's just as enjoyable as before and I got straight back into it :)
Starlight2336
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runesstarsbutterbeer
I flip and flip and flip trying
To find a familiar face in the photo album
Those are nothing to do with her, he says
And each touch disturbs
The fallen dust of memory
The pixelated stillness of a last touch,
Her breath lies in this room, to be
Wafted away at the next breath of wind
Turned by strangers' memories.
We skirt around the hole rearranging
Stripping the house of pieces of air to take home - each of us has her but none
In Totality
mmmartin10
Hey, by the way thank you for reading my book! I really appreciate it :)
runesstarsbutterbeer
@mmmartin10 You're welcome! I'm enjoying it a lot :) and can't wait to read the next part
CeciandJack
Come on, man. Post a story!
❤️ Ceciandjack
runesstarsbutterbeer
@CeciandJack Helloooo, totally fangirling right now, your book is amazing! Thanks, I've been thinking about it for a while :) maybe after exams
runesstarsbutterbeer
Vote for another part! And don't hesitate to comment, constructive criticism is welcome :) https://www.wattpad.com/story/126249517
JessicaMcGregor2
Thank you so much for all the support and votes you have given my story "blind date with a book!" I really appreciate it and am glad you like it (:
runesstarsbutterbeer
@JessicaMcGregor2 You're welcome! I love your writing style and can't wait for the next chapter, I really relate to your protagonist, stay amazing <3