runesstarsbutterbeer

I flip and flip and flip trying
          	To find a familiar face in the photo album
          	Those are nothing to do with her, he says
          	And each touch disturbs
          	The fallen dust of memory
          	The pixelated stillness of a last touch,
          	Her breath lies in this room, to be
          	Wafted away at the next breath of wind
          	Turned by strangers' memories.
          	We skirt around the hole rearranging
          	Stripping the house of pieces of air to take home - each of us has her but none
          	In Totality

CeciandJack

Wow! 
          
          You wiped our book out in record time. Awesome!
          
          Was it any good?
          
          Are you going to post a story for us to read?
          
          ✌❤
          Jack

runesstarsbutterbeer

I've even been watching documentaries about the cult mentality recently, and although I've always dreamt of writing a fantasy novel, it could be super fun to make it more realistic
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runesstarsbutterbeer

Also have one chapter for a book titled "what to do when faced with a crazy swan"
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runesstarsbutterbeer

Regarding the story, as you wish :D I dug up some cringey writing from 2015. It's a sort of opening for the fantasy cult murder spree idea mentioned ages ago. Still like the idea so it might go somewhere. In the meantime I'm busy with first year med classes...
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CeciandJack

Good morning and thanks for reading our crime texts book,  Runes.  And you really should post a story. How about a short sketch?
          
          Jack

CeciandJack

@runesstarsbutterbeer that's  awesome.   I think you are going to totally dig the part two.
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runesstarsbutterbeer

I actually have a short extract, written years ago, of the idea I had talked to you about. Would you do me the honour of reading it? It would be great to have some feedback
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runesstarsbutterbeer

@CeciandJack No, thank you for writing them! I'd actually forgotten I had it in my library and just started reading it again, it's just as enjoyable as before and I got straight back into it :)
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runesstarsbutterbeer

I flip and flip and flip trying
          To find a familiar face in the photo album
          Those are nothing to do with her, he says
          And each touch disturbs
          The fallen dust of memory
          The pixelated stillness of a last touch,
          Her breath lies in this room, to be
          Wafted away at the next breath of wind
          Turned by strangers' memories.
          We skirt around the hole rearranging
          Stripping the house of pieces of air to take home - each of us has her but none
          In Totality

mmmartin10

Hey, by the way thank you for reading my book! I really appreciate it :)

runesstarsbutterbeer

@mmmartin10 yayyyy
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mmmartin10

@runesstarsbutterbeer  I'll be posting later today
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runesstarsbutterbeer

@mmmartin10 You're welcome! I'm enjoying it a lot :) and can't wait to read the next part
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CeciandJack

Come on, man. Post a story!
          
          ❤️ Ceciandjack

CeciandJack

@CeciandJack cool. Not to be pushy or anything, but Genre?
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runesstarsbutterbeer

@CeciandJack Helloooo, totally fangirling right now, your book is amazing! Thanks, I've been thinking about it for a while :) maybe after exams
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JessicaMcGregor2

Thank you so much for all the support and votes you have given my story "blind date with a book!" I really appreciate it and am glad you like it (:

runesstarsbutterbeer

@JessicaMcGregor2 You're welcome! I love your writing style and can't wait for the next chapter, I really relate to your protagonist, stay amazing <3
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