beingahumblemuslimah
I read your story. Two chapters. Honestly speaking your story hasn't yet started. What I read was an introduction to two people and their lives as they see it. The development hasn't taken place yet. Keep going. I'm sure it's going to be amazing once your plot starts blooming in full show. Good Luck.
P.S is the guys character really very shady? Like those clichéd unattached gloomy and moody millionaire-damselindistress stories?
rushbreakheart
@beingahumblemuslimah hey, thanks for reading it out. Yes, its just the start. I'll write the next chapter soon. It will give a better exposure to what the story is about. And no, the guy is not moody or something; he is a mafia. He is evil in someway and completely straight-forward. You'll love the character. It's a fiction, but I want to touch reality with it. Anyways, thank you!