@Avancidy thanks. i love ur story though i found a couple of grammatical mistakes. im a weirdo like that, cant help it :) i wanted to 'like' all the chapters so that my friends on facebook can read ur stuff but ur story is so engrossing i'll do it later...also if, IF u dont mind could u please atleast in ur next uploads check the tense? if dont understand i'll help u. please dont think me overbearing or anyhting else...btw what time is it there? its 11 in the morning... oh and am also 'Less than five feet' though am 22 so i may not grow any taller...:(
