UgandanPilot

It’s is fine but you are right I need to revise the story and fix things 

@ent445meza Yes, it is. I like where your story is going (it could actually turn out to be a really steamy romance ), but like I've said earlier, I'm not a big fan of romance - regardless of genre - so please excuse me if I don't exactly love it.

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@whispheres YES! Definitley! We moved to college place back in December. We should do a sleepover, like we used to do in elementary! 

I'm going up for August we should hang out ;)