rxmeslvr

I just wrote smut for the first time and I don’t think it’s thattt bad omg

YarianyIrizarry3

Thoughts on the first look?

YarianyIrizarry3

@rxmeslvr right which is crazy cause kayda wasn’t on kissing anyone unlike him. My take tho is why give the boys a letter when they lost the challenge unless it shows how the girls saw the heart rate challenge ( based on some expressions especially Corbin’s like he made a “I got caught” face ) 
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rxmeslvr

Zach’s gonna say something disgusting abt the girls again after seeing the postcard and Kayda will get over whatever she saw on the postcard and stick with him 
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readerfreaklol

Your book deserves so much more attention like it’s that serious. I’m in love with it 

readerfreaklol

No i absolutely LOVE long chapters. I always dislike short chapters. Yours is definitely my #1 book
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rxmeslvr

Thankyou sm omg. I think ppl don’t like to read long chapters when it comes to love island fics.
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