creammoon08
Thank you for your love to my story sweetie,I am glad you like it
creammoon08
If your like it then I sure u will love my another story too sweetie,if your free or feel like reading something you can try my ''untold love"story.hope it was ur taste ↕️
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DilThodaPagal
@ryfgk5780 aww thanks for sharing your thoughts glad you like it ❤
DilThodaPagal
hey beautiful, thanks for giving my story a chance hope you enjoyed reading it ❤
if you have any suggestions please don't hesitate :)
ryfgk5780
@unknownname89 it's was cute and fluffy to read and i really like the talk scene between both couple like rey and aditya introduction conversation and ishi and adi cafe conversation
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DilThodaPagal
@ryfgk5780 my pleasure sweetheart ❤ can i ask you how it was like which scene did you like most?
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readerbutnowwriter
Thank you for voting on my story
Moonlitrosette2
Hiee , if you can than please do check my ishman story ❤️❤️❤️
ryfgk5780
@Moonlitrosette2 i checked your stories and it is awesome specially sad one you really know how to present emotion and also one of your one shot is very funny i really like it keep writing
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Lmnopq98765
Thank you,
Can you help me with your thoughts about let me burn if you have read that please
ryfgk5780
@Lmnopq98765 about predictable then it's not and boring it's depends on reader in my point it's ok neither boring not to intersting but don't worry when their will more ishamann,abhiman ,and abhishan moment or their rivalry moment it's will eventually become intresting ....then don't think much in start story need a buildup ...just keep writing and keep improving
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ryfgk5780
@f_k077 Always
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ryfgk5780
@bluebe33y_32 glad you like it