s3ntence

Okay sooo I wrote the first part for all of my characters, in order 
          	-Ryuji 
          	-William 
          	-Noah 
          	Now I need to get back to writing  
          	Anddd this week (Saturday to next Saturday) I’m flying to MILANO (yeay) so I won’t have TIME AT ALL to write even the most miserable sentence. 
          	Fantastic 

s3ntence

Okay sooo I wrote the first part for all of my characters, in order 
          -Ryuji 
          -William 
          -Noah 
          Now I need to get back to writing  
          Anddd this week (Saturday to next Saturday) I’m flying to MILANO (yeay) so I won’t have TIME AT ALL to write even the most miserable sentence. 
          Fantastic 

s3ntence

Okay so Hii 
          I’m writing a book with @R3n_3gades (I love you) and as I’m sooo sick of no representation/bad/ stereotypical representation of black people and poc in general both 2 out the 3  characters im in charge of are poc: 
          Ryuji is Japanese (cause at least I can’t be racist against myself) 
          William is (I won’t spoil the exact origin but he’s from subsaharan Africa) 
          Andd yeah Noah is disabled and genderqueer so I thought I wouldn’t want to risk too much on them cause I’m already gonna struggle trying not to be offensive while writing them. 
          So, my point is, is there any black person/ poc who could read what I wrote for William (and if possible a disabled person for Noah) and tell me what I wrote wrong ? 
          I really don’t wanna be offensive in any way and even though it’s absolutely not my point being racist (I’m literally half Asian- ) I thought it could be a good thing to make some actually concerned person check my work :) 
          God that was so long for absolutely no reason helppp 

Records_of_Millie

Stray kids everywhere all over the world

Records_of_Millie

Am I overreacting? Yes
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Records_of_Millie

I failed I'm not a great stay
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Records_of_Millie

this message may be offensive
Shit it's around not over
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LeMiroirMeduse

Traduit ton livre en allemand si te pléééé

s3ntence

ah nan si il doit etre en allemand c’est toi qui t’y colle mon niveau d’allemand se resume a FRAULINE 
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LeMiroirMeduse

@IoSystem  ICH HABE EINE KLEINE PAPAGEI, PAPAGEI
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