itsnotzaahhh

Heyyy<3
          
          I am writing a book called promises and I'm kind of new to this writing thing and I've only posted one chapter  so would you take a look at my book and tell me if it's missing something and if I need to add something to it and all and whta you feel about my writting if it's terrible could you pleaseee pleaseee held me to improve it as I really enjoyed writting the first chapter and i am a bit excited. . .  So if you do have the time will you please check it out will you
          
          Thank you for your time<3

sTrAwXbErRy_1369

Hey I just finished reading your book. It was awesome. I love all of the characters and the current plot. If you make the plot of the story a little bit more interesting in your future chapters, your book would be perfect. Other than that, your story is amazing. Keep up the good work!
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sTrAwXbErRy_1369

Yes ofc I’ll check your book. 
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