maddiebroemmer Jun 22, 2015 Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal your book has a great story line, but you should add more commas and periods. otherwise its just a run on sentence View 2 more replies maddiebroemmer @Maddieeee012 yeah, its really good Jun 22, 2015 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal sabrinaest4life @Maddieeee012 yeah I gotta work on that but other than that its good? Jun 22, 2015 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal