Sabryna

I just finished "Whispered Promises" and was shocked by the ending. You write about dominant women, but not really about mean ones. so in my mind I devised an alternate ending.
          Mom  said: "Oh Emily, get Perry some clean panties and both you girls come down to dinner, We brought pizza home"
          "And you Perry, are on laundry duty for two weeks. And you are wearing that outfit to school tomorrow." Also Emilie's closet is now open to you anytime.

What’s the  title of the next story after losing rene?because I’ve been searching that title up and can’t find it

@laceymarie74 but why wouldn't I, baby? Did you read the story yet?  I'm anxious to get you thoughts on it.  

Hello my Brookie's,
          
          I just wanted to take a moment to let you all know I just published a new story in my Life 2.ohhhhh Boy, the Naughty Collection. It's called Jared's Future. I'll warn you now, it's descriptive, naughty, and definitely intended for 18 and older, for sure. Also, don't let you the seemingly f'ed up situation in the story keep you from finishing it. 
          
          As always, I look forward to reading and responding to your comments on the story. 
          
          ❤️ Sabrynabrooklynne
          
          PS: Besure to check it my friend @laceymarie74 's books. She's a new, yet fantastic and very capable writer. Go show her some of the love you've shown me. 

Just reread "Show Them What You Can't Tell Them" and I love how you let us further in to Alexis' mind. We get to be privy to more of his thoughts and better empathize with what he's going through. With the additions, I feel like we better understand Beth and how her Autism affects not only her relationship with her son but also shaped her reactions to learning what he's going through and what he needs.
          
          I especially enjoyed how you took one short chapter of the characters heading down the east corridor of Fashion Towne Mall, toward the entrance to TG Dress Shop and expanded it enough to create 2 longer chapters out of it and in the process gave us changes that really brought it to life, well for me anyways. I felt like I was Alexis, internally debating what to do. 
          
          I love you as a lifelong friend and writing coach and can't get enough of your writing. No matter how improved you say my writing becomes, I'll still always envy you abs how superior your writing is to mine.  I just wish I still had time to devote to new works, but as you've seen, triplets, and now a special needs baby, will take all your time, energy, and devotion.
          
          
           Laindzy

Any one can please tell me what do you think about this?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1525740786?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=lesiasd15

Hello 

@bigbabylover1 ❤️ thanks ❤️

Hi guys. I just wanted to take a moment to introduce you to astory of mine that hasn't gotten much attention.
          
          It's one in proud of and I'm not sure what is holding it back. It's called,
          
          "Esperanza"
          
          On a dark rainy afternoon, a stolen ride, a displaced soul, a romance with a difference. She had a story to tell and Walter had a need to listen....
          
          Here's an excerpt from chapter 1:
          
          Harder and harder it rained around Willowpeak. The low-lying areas were starting to flood. I got stuck behind a couple of big rigs going up a hill. It was so dark from the really dense black storm clouds and heavy rain that it looked almost like the middle of the night, even though it was only in the mid afternoon.
          
          Just as I slowed to no more than a walking pace, the passenger door of my car suddenly opened and a girl climbed in. She was soaked, dripping water on my seat cushions as she turned to lock the door once she was inside...
          
          ...She tried a smile. She wore no make-up but her skin had that
          clearness only the young achieve. Her tangled hair, dark in what light 
          filtered though the storm, lay plastered tightly to her cheeks, neck and back. In much the same way, a cotton shirt clung to her shape. I mentally revised her age, those breasts seemed adolescent. 
          
          I smiled back, feeling a thrill of anticipation rush through me. She might be delectable, but there was also a possibility that she was underage. My heart skipped a beat.
          
          "I hope you don't mind too much, sir. I'm wet and cold and..." She turned her face away but continued looking at me sideways. "And I need a ride.....
          
          
          This story is quite different from the other stories I've written. Give it a try. I think you'll like it of you like any of my other stories. If you do check it out, let me know what you think, good or bad.
          
          

Hi dear followers. Guys, I'm so excited to make several announcements.  
          
          1) I have published a new story, "Death After Dan" in the Life After Loss collection. 
          
          2)I am working on another story that will go live in the next couple days in that collection as well, titled "Faith and Hope and Damian." 
          
          3)Over the past three days I have published a new book in the Life 2.0 series. It's a mature themed book titled, "Life 2.0oooh boy: The Naughty Collection," and it currently has three stories, spread over seven sizzling chapters, with more to come. These stories have a bit of a sexual theme or are graphic horror. Mature audiences only, please.
          
          I would love it off you guys would take the time to check these stories out and, as usual, give me your feedback.
          
          You guys are the best, I loved you all,
          
          Sabrynabrooklynne