ashleighholly

Hey, I was just wondering if you could give me some tips on making the french better in my stories hahaa 

sachas_diary

@ashleighholly and honestly if you need help translating any sentences you can ask me directly 
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sachas_diary

@ashleighholly haa i have no idea on how, but basically the thing is that it looks like it comes out straight from google translate which doesnt look natural and in a way that no one would say a sentence like that, there's also sometimes a problem of pronouns, in french to say "you", you have 2 ways, there's "tu" which is the pronoun u use when you know the person, and u use "vous" when you want to be formal/talking to a stranger for example, i think ive seen nick calling his dad by "vous" which would be a bit confusing 
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QueenSavage0812

Unfortunately it’s probably the heartbreaking “show me how bad it can get” scene from the movie if not next chapter definitely chapter 7

QueenSavage0812

@madshadit I’m ready to cry my eyes out
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madshadit

@sachas_diary trust me when I say that its not nearly as bad as it is in the movie (and its definitely not an unnecessary scene. It's gonna be an important turning point for Nick) ... but it physically hurt me to write. 
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QueenSavage0812

@sachas_diary no problem happy to be of service :)
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AledLast4321

do you manage to read all the fics? thx for liking mine

sachas_diary

@AledLast4321 yep I've read em all ,it's been more than a year since I've got this acc so it's all the stories I've read in a year so far,and yw!
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