sadarieshoe

i miss this app

melthebaddest

Hey guys could you pls check out my book it’s my first it only has two chapters so far could you pls give some feedback and tell me if you like it so far

sadarieshoe

before i read it, i think you need an enticing description to pull the reader in. it’s a bit basic so some character descriptions and giving the reader a genuine feel for the story can help alot. i can write you an example if you want?
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unicornprincess777

Wow I think it’s been least a year since u last updated and updated promised too

sadarieshoe

i have an idea for something i wanna write, it won’t be my previous book though i still have them in my drafts
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unicornprincess777

@sadarieshoe im literally waiting this better be a Halloween gift or summ
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sadarieshoe

if i reload im gonna do a complete revamp, just know its dedicated to you xD
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AlmedaWasMad

friend u got any mafia recs 

sadarieshoe

wicked fate- expresslust, incomplete
            egypt- toxicchocolatee, complete 
            the castillo crime family(pt1) and tied to a castillo(pt2)- spiritualhottie, complete
            the stepbrother(pt1) and principessa(pt2)- misslynnewrites, complete
            thorns & roses- chris1541, complete
            mob wife- spiritualhottie, complete
            devotion- midnxghtsun, complete
            last breath- nessal05, complete
            sunshine- kotasonvenus, complete
            his catch- nessal05, complete 
            bittersweet karma(pt1) and bittersweet innocence(pt2)- inglorio, complete, incomplete 
            someone like you- justsade, complete
            take care- chubblebunny, complete 
            love drought- ib3writing, incomplete 
            bound souls- keriwrites, incomplete 
            daises and diamonds- maskedinthelight, incomplete 
            yours to keep- akawaiiisan, incomplete 
            sweet lips- coco_dreamz, incomplete 
            the underworlds secret- paulleyd, incomplete 
            lies are told- music_lover_2, incomplete 
            dirty money- spiritualhottie, discontinued
            forever his princess- chris1541, complete
            denial- helxiq, incomplete 
            her prince of darkness- dontworryboutit123, complete
            
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AlmedaWasMad

OMG HEY NEW TASTEFUL FRIENNDDDD 

sadarieshoe

Mina is a bit meek but i can hate her for it, and Damien is so fineee. 
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AlmedaWasMad

@sadarieshoe I tried to get into the bittersweet series but the fmc wasn’t badass and it pissed me off 
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sadarieshoe

omg it’s not a mafia book but please with a cherry on top is amazing, it’s one of the best books ever. i also have some good mafia books in my list like bittersweet karma which is so good.
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