My friend finished going through What Is Done & picking out the little grammar mistakes, so I 100% hope it makes more sense now! Please let me know if you guys find any more!
I have a friend going through What Is Done and picking out all my little grammar mistakes, so thank you!
(Apparently in the 800 or so times I've edited it, I kept passing these over. Sometimes I forgot to remove a word or forgot to add one. )
So I've been updating What Is Done accordingly. Hopefully it makes more sense now!
Don't be surprised but I changed Siofria's original surname "Vaulé" to "Va’úhl" for the desired effect of it looks more like it's pronounced now (va-ool).