Sagara Aldavy

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hallo! check my story 'frozen once more' please? i need some comments to improve my writing thankyou x

Oke, sobat, saya baru saja menyelesaikan Chapter 1 dari cerita saya. Cerita ini berjudul C2 And The Mysteries of Rock Mt. Kalau anda suka Vomments, ya!

Hi. I'm Sagara Aldavy, and I am Indonesian.
          I will serve you with some good stories. The stories will post chapter by chapter.
          Sorry for my bad english, I'll learn more about english first, and sorry, I can only serve Indonesian now.
          
          Hai. Saya Sagara Aldavy.
          Kami akan memberikan cerita- cerita menarik dengan gaya bahasa unik.
          Cerita akan di post chapter demi chapter.
          Terima Kasih.
          
          Contact us at davyaldavy@gmail.com. And I will appreciate them who contacts me.
          NO Hi or promote email allowed. 
          
          Thanks