saggehh

Reading my old writing makes me want to go on an endless run like forest gump did. I really need to update a lot of older chapters and re-do the arc with Ethan. I'm aiming for a more realistic cold-to-warm development instead of an instantly very warm and affectionate, trusting Ethan. Reason why I went for that version at first is because he was so sweet and pretty straightforward/fast with Elena (referring to his offer to her to meet his wife and child after literally knowing her for 10 minutes)
          	
          	But I need a more rugged, traumatized format, something a little more realistic.
          	
          	By the way, opinion on "Y/N"'s personality? I'm trying to keep it as much of a blank slate as I can, but I'll rewrite her a bit too so the development from inexperienced/scared/incapable flows into experienced/brave/headstrong/capable a little better. What would you suggest I'd add to the "Y/N" slate? I was thinking I'd make her speech a little more formal at the start and then slowly get her influenced by Ethan's swearing et cetera.
          	
          	Also, I've also got a whole ending plan, but I really need to rewrite the arc's first because— just re-reading my older/un-updated chapters make me want to run away.

mayay101

@saggehh Can't wait to see how the story goes on. Even tho you say that you cringe at the stuff in the earlier episodes haha. Can't also wait to see Heisenberg and how you change some of the writing. Definitely will be re-reading the story!
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saggehh

@ AnjealousAnaconda3  Thank you! I've done enough cringing at it so I think we're on the up hahaa, and a hint to how the story ends huh? I'll keep it vague, I'll say that there definitely will be shock and people might get mad, BUT I'm planning on extending the story post-canon. There is a pretty big event coming up two chapters after the most recent one, don't know how people will react to it but I can't wait to publish it.
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AnjealousAnaconda3

@saggehh they say if you don’t cringe at your old self your not improving ❤️that’s the mark of a good author. Can we get a hint at how the story ends? Please!!!!!
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TheWeirdOneInTheBack

The updated parts are so freaking good! Oh my gosh! I don't know how you do it but every single stage this book goes through I fall more and more in love with it. I feel like your writing speaks to my soul and scratches an itch that's been there for so long that I forgot it was even there. At this point I feel like I just keep this app around because I can't stop reading your writing. Love it as always! ❤️

saggehh

@ TheWeirdOneInTheBack  This is one of the nicest, sweetest most beautiful comments I've ever gotten. Thank you so, so, so much!!! I'm super glad my writing speaks to you, I tend to doubt it myself at times, but comments like this make me feel a lot better about it as a whole. Again, thank you for sticking around and for your kind words, they motivate me and speak to my very soul as well. Much love, ❤
            
            :))
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saggehh

Reading my old writing makes me want to go on an endless run like forest gump did. I really need to update a lot of older chapters and re-do the arc with Ethan. I'm aiming for a more realistic cold-to-warm development instead of an instantly very warm and affectionate, trusting Ethan. Reason why I went for that version at first is because he was so sweet and pretty straightforward/fast with Elena (referring to his offer to her to meet his wife and child after literally knowing her for 10 minutes)
          
          But I need a more rugged, traumatized format, something a little more realistic.
          
          By the way, opinion on "Y/N"'s personality? I'm trying to keep it as much of a blank slate as I can, but I'll rewrite her a bit too so the development from inexperienced/scared/incapable flows into experienced/brave/headstrong/capable a little better. What would you suggest I'd add to the "Y/N" slate? I was thinking I'd make her speech a little more formal at the start and then slowly get her influenced by Ethan's swearing et cetera.
          
          Also, I've also got a whole ending plan, but I really need to rewrite the arc's first because— just re-reading my older/un-updated chapters make me want to run away.

mayay101

@saggehh Can't wait to see how the story goes on. Even tho you say that you cringe at the stuff in the earlier episodes haha. Can't also wait to see Heisenberg and how you change some of the writing. Definitely will be re-reading the story!
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saggehh

@ AnjealousAnaconda3  Thank you! I've done enough cringing at it so I think we're on the up hahaa, and a hint to how the story ends huh? I'll keep it vague, I'll say that there definitely will be shock and people might get mad, BUT I'm planning on extending the story post-canon. There is a pretty big event coming up two chapters after the most recent one, don't know how people will react to it but I can't wait to publish it.
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AnjealousAnaconda3

@saggehh they say if you don’t cringe at your old self your not improving ❤️that’s the mark of a good author. Can we get a hint at how the story ends? Please!!!!!
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