sagittarius45

Well I’m very old now and I apologize for the grammar  dang what the hell

sagittarius45

God I’m looking over it and It’s just depressing
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Cooljag1234

@sagittarius45 Same bro, same. I have completed 4 extra English classes since the last time I wrote ;-;
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Dokwoo

Hello, your story about the wrong number is very good and I wonder if I could translate it into Spanish. Of course, I would give you the credit since it is your story, but I would like to be able to translate it. I look forward to your reply, thank you.

sagittarius45

Well I’m very old now and I apologize for the grammar  dang what the hell

sagittarius45

God I’m looking over it and It’s just depressing
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Cooljag1234

@sagittarius45 Same bro, same. I have completed 4 extra English classes since the last time I wrote ;-;
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sagittarius45

which book would you like me to continue?

sagittarius45

@Dreamer_hannah  its called i did not time travel
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Dreamer_hannah

@sagittarius45 can you do another book about peter traveling back to the pass? Just asking if not then you don't have to! 
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sagittarius45

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no way home spoiler 
          
          
          
          Okay but u guys...
          
          
          I feel like throwing up this is a diffrent type of pain imagine going to the grave seeing Ben next tk May next to your mom and dad next to tony and then your pseudo uncle comes and doesn't even know u? How the fuck do u deal with that? Tbh id become a villain like megamind i don't think I can handle a world this shitty  

pashmit101

@sagittarius45 That movie emotionally exhausted me 
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StarkRo

Hey bestie, just wanted to say that your story is amazing! I'm taking about "I don't know you" here and I just wanted to say this (I don't mean to mock you or anything, I'm asking this in the most respectful way I can. Because I'm just curious on what you will say :)
          
          So, um, I've noticed some spelling mistakes and errors in your story. This story is great! The plot, the story line is good but just some spelling mistakes. So I was thinking that... Maybe I could help you edit some of those out and like be an editor?
          
          (I'm not asking for money lol just for free cuz I'm bored so why not. I don't even want credit)
          
          I have everything in mind ok so you don't have to give me your account password or anything! Just like I'll do everything in Google docs. You just have to copy and send me the chapters and I'll send you them back but edited. I will not change the chapters nor I will change the story line. Just correct the spelling mistakes :))
          
          I have so much more to say. If you want just message me <3

StarkRo

@sagittarius45 you still want them edited cuz you never replied 
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StarkRo

@sagittarius45 Really? That's great You can pm on here or snap 
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sagittarius45

Peter leans between their seats. “What do you see?”
          “They’re walking inside the restaurant,” Tony informs him. “He’s making a joke.”
          “Is she laughing? Give me the binoculars.”
          “No,” Tony leans away from his grabby hands. “You dragged me out here, I get to spy.”
          Nat rolls her eyes at their antics. “There’s another pair in the bag.”