Anna Byers, but my pseudonym is Milo Patel.

Could someone please review "To Fetch A Pail of Water" for me?  Thanks!

@arielleave  lololol

hehe...*shuffle quietly over*...*poke* *RUN AWAY!!*

I've changed Low-life to Dropout.  Please check it out, tell me if it's a good idea, please!  I NEED SOME FEEDBACK!  I'm really trying not to write the lyrics to Pumped Up Kicks here, since that's what I'm listening to.
          
          But yeah -- if you guys could please look over Dropout, tell me if it's a good idea or not, that would be great.  Like, really, really great.  REALLY great.
          
          Kapische?
          
          I've always wanted a valid reason to use that in spoken conversation.
          
          Anyway.
          
          So yeah, check that out, please????
          
          Peace out
          
          MILO

K, guys so here's the thing - Chapter 7 of TDDUP is NOT completed!  The thingie that I just uploaded is a TEASER!  It is a TEASER that I wrote this morning!  I almost missed the bus because I was writing this TEASER!  So...yeah.  There's that.
          
          And there's also the fact that A World of Blood and Bones is in BAD BAD BAD BAD shape!  If anyone has any ideas for that, let me know PLEASE!
          
          Also, if someone has an idea for whom Harlowe should kill next in The Nightmare Offices, it would be GREATLY appreciated!
          
          And last but not least, CHECK MY SPELLING!

@Paigiewaigie49  You're totally welcome!

Thanks for fanning back!!!!:)

'Till Death Do Us Part, The Nightmare Offices, and A World of Blood and Bones are now up-to-date and ready to be read!  Please, please, please, PLEASE check out TDDUP!  Thanks!
          
          Peace out,
          
          MILO

Thanks to everyone for the fans, if I haven't thanked you already.
          
          Now, for the importantness.
          
          Chapter 6 of TDDUP is in the process of being edited and revised on my laptop.  I am currently trying not to type the lyrics to Linkin Park's "Numb," for that is what I am listening to.  I am hoping that you will all take the time to look over what I have posted TDDUP and critique it, to tell me if there is anything that makes no sense or any grammatical errors that Spell Check did not pick up.
          
          Danke Schon again!
          
          Peace out,
          
          MILO

Thanks so much!  Really, thanks.  :D