Suity217

Hi dear poz  complete your story properly. O really like it. But mai disappoin ho gaya e dekh ke ki tumne story complete nehi ki. I like it become there is no too much plotting . Evil ness aur negativity. Firstly Viduyt aur Avni ki family tha aur e tumne chote chapter mai hi wrap-around diya toh achha laga ... uske bad Neil aur Avni shadhi... now I want to see kaise Avni apni sasural sambhal to hai aur kaise Sweta ka dil jit ta hai aur sath mai bebe ka sweta ki liye woh cute si taunt.... bass ehi... it is really Good.

mk_happysoul

          Heya!!
          
          Thank you for your precious votes... Hope you had liked my work... 
          
          Please do share it with your friends too :) 
          
          Take care! 
          ❤❤

sakshi_fire_34

@mk_happysoul sure dear i will share it.. and yes i like your work.❤❤❤
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RiyaMaji

Hiii, if possible check out my stories. I hope you like it❤. 
          Take care!! ❤

sakshi_fire_34

@RiyaMaji happy new year dear ❤❤❤
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RiyaMaji

@avneil__story__10 thanks a lot dear for voting ❤❤
            All the best for the new journey as a writer☺
            Take care!! 
            Happy new year!! (❁´◡`❁)
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sakshi_fire_34

@RiyaMaji ofcourse i read your all stories ❤❤
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