Sakshi

Hey writer I know ki tum bahot achhe ache story likhte ho. Mai hamesha story nehi padh pati. Kiuki bahot busy raheti hu. But time nikal ke padhti hu. Tum joh naye story likh rahe ho uska 1 st episode bahot achhe laga mujhe. Mai chati hu tum ese aur bhi achha banao. Maine esse pahele 1 , 2 ese story padhi thi jike end mai Avni aur Neil ek nehi huya aur esabhi dekhi ki Neil aur Avni ki mat ho gai matlab dono alag ho gai. But mai chati hu tumhara e story alag ho , kiuki story ki beginning bahot achhe a hai. Aur ha story chota ho toh chalega lekin complete jarurat karna. It is just my suggestion . 

Hi dear poz  complete your story properly. O really like it. But mai disappoin ho gaya e dekh ke ki tumne story complete nehi ki. I like it become there is no too much plotting . Evil ness aur negativity. Firstly Viduyt aur Avni ki family tha aur e tumne chote chapter mai hi wrap-around diya toh achha laga ... uske bad Neil aur Avni shadhi... now I want to see kaise Avni apni sasural sambhal to hai aur kaise Sweta ka dil jit ta hai aur sath mai bebe ka sweta ki liye woh cute si taunt.... bass ehi... it is really Good.

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