flowersftroses

Hi, @sakuraXukimura! My friend is writing a new book and she needs some feedback. I was wondering if you can give it a read and leave some votes and comments to encourage her. The book gets better after the first chapter, though. Thank you. 
          
          Here’s the link: https://my.w.tt/O9f5LVioi4

sakuraXukimura

@flowersftroses it's not really my genre?
            So I find it hard to follow the story line but I showed it to my friend and she said it made sense so it's probably just me
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flowersftroses

@sakuraXukimura which part are you confused about?
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sakuraXukimura

@flowersftroses so far it's really good but im a bit confused about what going on in the beginning
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