@RedllI hey mate, i check your book. I'll keep reading it as i go. It's got a good start, maby you can do a little more with the first part, maybe make additional prelog, to the guy in the taxi, like have a bit od description about how the city looks, build up rhe scenes your doing fine just check your position when your writing this sort of thing, futuristic sifi can be hard sometimes when your starting out, just remember to keep posting regularly wether its once a day or, evey few days then post them on your socials linkedin is great for building a portfolio
