myfakelife69

I noticed you don't follow me, and I posted a message that people who read but don't follow won't see.
          
          But yeah, I go back and reread chapters sometimes and tweak things. So if you've already read one and come back later, it might be a little different. Nothing big or plot-related, just small stuff like pacing, dialogue, monologue or description. It's mostly me trying to get the character's voice right. Sometimes I'll read something back and be like, yeah… they wouldn't say that, and fix it. I have a really specific voice for Rowan, so if it's not hitting, I'll go back and adjust it.
          
          Also, I edited chapter 7 today (mostly the beginning, up until Camilla walks off) and chapter 8 a bit. That one actually matters because I added something about a dog Allison had, so it might be worth rereading the start, the part where Rowan's being a perv over the photos. The dog comes up again later in chapter 21 when Rowan talks about Allison's sister, that part iis kinda in the middle of the chapter. Read it!

samirahc0002

Very interesting thank you for letting me know will re read these again 
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