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randomspazz
Hey, I read your story. I was impressed with your structure, grammar, and spelling since I only saw some very minor mistakes. It was definitely an interesting concept, and I'm intrigued to see how you develop it. The one thing I had a hard time with was seeing Hikaru and Kaoru being completely heartless since I happen to like them as characters, but that was a personal thing.
samisayshi67
@randomspazz yeah i dont think i could ever write someone to be heartless,especially when I've seen them be so caring
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